Society is comprises of diffrent people. To live in society it is
important that we should able to co-operate with each other. Some
people's think that it is better to work independently while others
don't think so. According to me, it is important to be able to work
with a group of people on team for the following reasons.
Working in team makes work more easy.When more people are involved in
same work we get different approach for the same work. Responsibility
of work is not dependent on individual person so team is ready to take
difficult task. For example, when I was in last year of graduation,
every team needs to complete there fianl year project. I had the team
of three people and we had make project on topic of secure transmission
images between sender and receiver. For me that topic was really
terrifying because I was not good in that subject. While working on
project we divide task to everyone and decided that will help each
other whenever we got stuck. We worked individually on some and on some
part we work together and this way we completed our project. If we
wern't working in team I wouldn't have able to complete the project so
working in tam makes task more plausible.
Team work helps individual with opportunity for interaction and this
interaction help individual to be better responsible citizen in society
with his active interaction in society. For example, when I was in
second year of my graduation, I worked as volunteer in oragnizing
team. Our task was to oraginze the event in college. Working as a team
memeber I get to know about the differnt views of other memebers. How
to understand the feelings of others and how to resolve the conflicts
between the team. This interaction in team memebr help to realize that
same things apply to every individual. I started participate in social
club to provide eduation for poor children. If it weren't the team work
I wouldn't have been able to understand my responsibility.
In sum, it is more imporatant to be work with a group of people on team
rather than to work independenmtly. Working in team make taks more
achieveable and helps to understand their responsibilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
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...able to co-operate with each other. Some peoples think that it is better to work ...
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...etter to work independently while others dont think so. According to me, it is im...
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
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Suggestion:
...proach for the same work. Responsibility of work is not dependent on individual p...
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...dividual person so team is ready to take difficult task. For example, when I was ...
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Suggestion: Difficult
...ual person so team is ready to take difficult task. For example, when I was in last y...
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Suggestion:
..., when I was in last year of graduation, every team needs to complete there fianl...
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Suggestion:
...there fianl year project. I had the team of three people and we had make project ...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
...the team of three people and we had make project on topic of secure transmission...
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Images
...ect on topic of secure transmission images between sender and receiver. For me tha...
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Line 23, column 65, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...d receiver. For me that topic was really terrifying because I was not good in tha...
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Suggestion: Terrifying
...eiver. For me that topic was really terrifying because I was not good in that subject....
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...because I was not good in that subject. While working on project we divide task t...
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Suggestion:
...t good in that subject. While working on project we divide task to everyone and d...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...everyone and decided that will help each other whenever we got stuck. We worked i...
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Suggestion: Other
...one and decided that will help each other whenever we got stuck. We worked indivi...
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Suggestion:
... worked individually on some and on some part we work together and this way we co...
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Suggestion: Part
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and this way we completed our project. If we wernt working in team I wouldnt ...
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: wouldn't
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Working
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Suggestion:
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to provide eduation for poor children. If it werent the team work I wouldnt h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, second, so, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04787234043 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83974312466 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452127659574 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 565.2 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1249800482 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.2727272727 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22727272727 5.45110844103 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 32.0 4.53405017921 706% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 60.0 5.5376344086 1083% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353833874968 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12047439838 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113230709715 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107299825767 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102634498685 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.