An old friend is coming to town and has invited you to go to the cinema. Write to your friend. In your letter
Explain that you are unable to come
Find out how long your friend is staying in town
Arrange a suitable time to meet
Dear Thu,
How is your family? Are your kids well? I am very happy when I know that you are coming. Thanks for your invite me to go movies but I am so sorry because I can't watch film with you.
Did you remember I told you about San's wedding in last month? On the 1st of October, I will flight to Ha Noi to attend her wedding and I will spend five days at there. This is a reason why I can't receive your invitation.
How long have you been in Ho Chi Minh City? There are many beautiful places where you go sightseeing. I will comeback in 6th and could you arrange to meet me in this evening? I have many things want to tell you about.
Best wishes for you,
Calla Balls
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...o go movies but I am so sorry because I cant watch film with you. Did you remem...
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Line 9, column 192, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e days at there. This is a reason why I cant receive your invitation. How long...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 559.0 937.175257732 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 135.0 206.0 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14074074074 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00019203468 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696296296296 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 164.7 290.88556701 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5047276568 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 46.5833333333 76.5299724578 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.25 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245900939737 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940783434859 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444599919077 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142047739289 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614143790054 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.7 8.37731958763 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 94.15 70.7449484536 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.9 7.45979381443 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.55 8.71597938144 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.59 7.59969072165 74% => OK
difficult_words: 12.0 41.2886597938 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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