Internet helps students better than teacher in learning process especially for children. What extend to agree and disagree to this statement?
Surely, in modern era we never come off of gadget. Nowadays, it becomes co-worker always accompany our lives from early morning till morning again. Everyone needs gadget from elementary school till a supervisor. Especially for children, they tend to use gadget for playing game. But behind it all, we can gain something be useful namely internet. It means we will get benefits that help us to do everything such as update information from abroad, events in the world, and everything what do you want to know. Actually, internet usage for children has two blades. On the one hand internet usage can help their duty, whereas in the other hands internet usage will loose their contact social to another people such as teacher, parents, and their friends. Hence, I intent find positive and negative.
Nowadays, in Indonesia every parent buys gadget which they expect it simply learning process for their children. As far as we know, we can utilize internet to do assignment which we can find out everything that relevant with our duty. When we use internet, automatically we can save time and indirectly it provides our simplicity. Internet has many kinds of benefit for example as addition lesson yet understand from school. Practice our children to use computer is like get duty from school and then they must send it to email their teacher. Absolutely, utilization of internet will increase their knowledge and insight.
Nevertheless, besides that all it turns out internet usage for children has negative impact namely loose contact social another people. Certainly, internet usage for learning is good, yet the student also needs pay attention of the teacher. When they make conversation is like dialogue with the teacher indirectly they have done social activity. Not only important to keep contact social but also it important to develop their character in order to respect with another people small example his friends in school. The teacher has obligation to educate the student not only for their knowledge but also moral value. In modern era, moral value it’s important to keep their behavior. As far as we know recently, the student too much play internet in gadget so that decrease their respect to each other.
Therefore, we have to know internet usage for children. Learn is important for student in order to more clever than before. But, clever it’s not sufficient we need concern for others. As parent, we have great responsibility to educate our children. To prevent the negative things, that we need an undesirable way namely to give limit to use internet in his computer or gadget. So that they can develop their character as well as their respect.
it becomes co-worker always accompany our lives
it becomes co-workers who always accompany our lives
internet usage will loose their contact social to another people
internet usage will lose its social contact to another person
in Indonesia every parent buys gadget which they expect it simply learning process for their children.
in Indonesia every parent buys gadget and expects it useful in the learning process for their children.
Sentence: Practice our children to use computer is like get duty from school and then they must send it to email their teacher.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to like and get
Sentence: Nevertheless, besides that all it turns out internet usage for children has negative impact namely loose contact social another people.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to contact and social
Sentence: Not only important to keep contact social but also it important to develop their character in order to respect with another people small example his friends in school.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to contact and social
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to it and important
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to another and people
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to example and his
moral value it's important to keep their behavior.
abut moral values, it's important to keep their behavior.
the student too much play internet
the students play internet too much
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