The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015
The line chart illustrates the figure for Vietnamese students studying in the average in France, Russia and America over a period of 15 years starting 2000.
It can be clearly seen that while the figure for Vietnamese students studying in France and America experienced a substantial growth the opposite was true for Russia.
In 2000, the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France was highest, standing at 3.5 million in comparison with 3 million students in Russia and 1.5 million students in America. Over the next five years, the average figure for Vietnamese students studying in France and Russia went through a significant decline of 1 million students. By contrast, a steady increase of a half of 1 million was seen in that average figure in America.
The period 2005-2010 witnessed a stability in the number of Vietnamese students studying France around 3.5 million. while the average figure for Vietnamese students studying russia experienced a slight reduction from 2.2 million to 1.8 million students, that the average figure increased sharply by 1 million in America. The was upward trend in the average number of Vietnamese students studying in whole three country. A significant development in the number of student of 1 million in france and America between 2010 and 2015. In this period witnessed a steady rise in the number of students in Russia fell by approximately 0.7 million students.
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| 2019-11-21 | yeu192 | 73 | view |
| 2019-09-24 | Pham Mai Nguyet | 67 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24675324675 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78701823184 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.402597402597 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 363.6 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.909212942 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.2 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414215924742 0.215688989381 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21680056274 0.103423049105 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762849712416 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292263968113 0.15604864568 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734721217411 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.