Urban areas provide much better facilities than the rural areas discuss it's advantages and disadvantages ?
In this contemporary era, the suburban areas have tremendous types of merits in services and not countryside areas. However, people cannot avoid some crucial prose of town village in this essay I will analyze the merits and demerits before reaching a reasonable conclusion.
The cities have many kinds of facilities such as a massive level of education, lastly, various kinds of shops are available in suburban areas. The urban area's education system is greater the teachers are highly educated. Moreover, factories are developing day by day. Therefore, more factories mean more production of products and food is also an essential part of everyone's life. Thus, the cities have also a better number of shops despite rural areas.in every region's people want to stay in urban areas' rather than town village, because urban areas are fully loaded with services,
In spite of it, the cities have few notable cons, therefore, such matters in rural areas have some opposite pros and not metro cities. Such as traffic congestion, unnatural plants, pollution, unnatural products. For instance, in traffic, there are many car drivers facing the hurdles on road. Moreover, in most of the advanced cities, people are using unnatural plants to decorate their homes and due to pollution breathing problems, cities also having disadvantages, most of the products of urban areas also meet with some pesticides and products have also accomplished the process. Thus, urban cities have a fast and pace life. These are the major disadvantages of urban areas.
To sum up that, the rural areas have fewer pros but their people are eco-friendly and decent masses and not urban areas inhabitants.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'areas'' or 'area's'?
Suggestion: areas'; area's
... available in suburban areas. The urban areas education system is greater the teacher...
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Line 5, column 531, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in urban areas rather than town village, because urban areas are fully loaded wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26296296296 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63494767416 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.149214538 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226252745545 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763041091418 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838393563308 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148401414175 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703626922787 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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