Many people believe that Social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and Society.
To what extent do you agree?
Craze of social websites such as Facebook is growing rapidly nowadays. While some people believe that Social websites are beneficial, I agree to a greater extent that they are having a detrimental effect on the individuals and society.
To Support, This is not hidden that social website has become an ardent habit of a major group of individuals and communities. New generation tend to spent most of their time on social websites such as Facebook, Instagram and Twitter which is resulting them to be disjointed from their families and surroundings.
Many people believe that these websites are connecting people around the globe. It helps people to know individuals from different countries and communities. Which is true but at the same time it is disconnecting people from the society that they live in as they spend a huge time connecting with people who they have no idea about.
In addition to this, Teenagers are the future of the community and this group is at the top of running behind the glitter of the social websites.
As people on social platforms shows a completely different side of their lives which is 90% fake. This fake fairy tale fascinates adolescents so much that they start developing a though of having the same lifestyle.
This affect them mentally. Most of the young kids are influenced negatively such as they develop a feeling of jealousy and frustration if they are not able to lead like their influencers.
To conclude, Local communities and individuals has made socials websites an extremely important part of their lives that they are lacking behind in forming a bond with the people around them. Consequently, It is effecting the moral values of our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d the glitter of the social websites. As people on social platforms shows a comp...
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Line 17, column 169, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...e lacking behind in forming a bond with the people around them. Consequently, It is effecting the mora...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04593639576 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77455146355 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530035335689 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1023951523 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224481108981 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826550275551 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658431843394 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108862017162 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826819848662 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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