Some people think that environmental protection is the responsibility of the government. Others believe that not only the government but also individuals need to take action to protect the environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In the contemporary world, environmental-related issues have become a major concern. Some people believe only authorities can intervene in this matter, without the needs for an individual’s effort, while others feel that both the government and its people are mutually responsible for maintaining and preserving the environment. This essay will discuss both sides in depth and state why I strongly agree that it is crucial for the government and individuals to be involved in offering pragmatic measures for these problems.
On the one hand, individuals cannot handle the task of environmental protection with ease. However, if we introduce some minor alterations to our daily routine then the effect we are causing are less likely to be detrimental. For instance, a recycling shopping bag can be utilised instead of taking out the plastic bag available at the counter. This proves to be ideal since it will cut down the number of plastic bags being used. Thus, air pollution is minimised caused by burning plastic bags which leads to a healthier environment for everyone.
On the other hand, the government plays a pivotal role in protecting the ecosystem. To begin with, governments can impose stringent rules in order for the people to abide by. The government, for example, can ban the chemical factories for the act of discharging chemical waste onto nearby rivers. As a result of this, the likelihood of algae bloom is lowered which follow up with well-preservation of water environment.
To conclude, environmental deterioration are happening at an alarming rate. I firmly agree that the collaboration between the government and their citizens is the sensible approach to address the problems that we are facing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ragmatic measures for these problems. On the one hand, individuals cannot hand...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34181818182 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21086173135 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629090909091 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6935296833 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.928571429 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235002617746 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074924658065 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767932854017 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129398908583 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735818229691 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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