Cellphones were introduced in the land during 20th century, which a great invention to the world. Mr Dennie the inventor of mobile phones claimed that the world is going to see the magical movement and a fast growth of each county via using cellphones. Also he mentioned that cellphone sellers will be the richest person across the globe during his motivational seminar in Manchester. As per recent survey, 80% population of the world use cellphones. Cellphones are used for better communication in the wider range. I shall discuss some of them below.
Firstly, Cellphones remove barrier's between country and the people lives all around the world. People use them for both personal and business reasons. Cellphones have facilities to use the latest technology such as Email, What's App, Google Maps, Banking System etc. Mostly people use Whats App to communicate their friends, family in a range of 1000 miles or more. Let's talk about the Business who builds more revenue to the county via good communication. International Software Company deal millions dollar project by using a phone meeting which is tremendous. People easily can access the software made in United States sitting in Bangladesh. Airplanes covers 2000 miles distance by the perfect maps invented in a phone.
People can't think their life without cellphones because they are completing a work of 30 days just in 30 minutes just using a cellphone worth of 10,000 rupees.
Secondly, All the good things come with bad things so as cellphones. For an Example, Tower setup to access phones damaged the growth of trees, Electromagnetic radiation in the cellphones causing the death of birds and increasing disease like cancer in human body. Another example is entertainment world, mobile games, social media available in the phone are giving a wrong direction to the new generation. New generation are more focus in these technology instead study. Perfect example is my younger brother ranked last in his last semester because of lack of interest towards his study and spending more time to his favorite games in the cellphones.
In conclusion, Cellphones must use as a better platform to grow personally and professionally. Age of below 18 should not have access to all the technology. We should appeal such rules to Indian Constitution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Suggestion: What's
...se the latest technology such as Email, Whats App, Google Maps, Banking System etc. M...
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Suggestion: What's
..., Banking System etc. Mostly people use Whats App to communicate their friends, famil...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...amily in a range of 1000 miles or more. Lets talk about the Business who builds more...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...fect maps invented in a phone. People cant think their life without cellphones bec...
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Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'these technologies'?
Suggestion: this technology; these technologies
...ation. New generation are more focus in these technology instead study. Perfect example is my yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16533333333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77241523265 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618666666667 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9706441652 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2173913043 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3043478261 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.04347826087 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278379591696 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769560751756 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911191433905 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13284022394 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831304335653 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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