Some people think that higher salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that good atmosphere at a workplace is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion with relevant examples.
Undoubtedly, it is a debatable issue among communities that what is main aspect for selecting a job such as more salaries, better atmosphere, good services as well. However, a section of society deems that handsome income giving jobs is better for humans to work because money helps them to full fill their needs and offering high living standards while other support that good surrounding and facilities are crucial to work as it provides comfortable feeling to employees in workplaces and to make people social. This easy will shed light on both prospective along with my perception.
The one school of thought believes that higher wealth offering jobs are necessary to select a companies to work because nowadays a majority of people running after money to get better services. In addition to this, a vast amount of humans are expanding a huge time on works to earn more bread and butter the reason is that they want to take all services which make their life convenient and comfortable. Even though the masses have often influence to see the rich living standard of wealthy citizens so they have great desire to give that type of living standards to their families. Moreover, so that is the reason lots of people give priority to those companies which offers them vast income paid jobs. For example, a survey by media reported that in western regions a majority of progenitors thinks that it mandatory for both to doing more work to earn lots of money to the betterment of their offspring’s futures.
The another school of thought said that highly income is not essential factor to choose a industries to work but also friendly environment is important as well. Similarly, if companies which offering who services to their that are convenient and comfortable for them than it’s beneficial in physically and mentally ways for their workers as they well concentrate on work as well as achieve their goals and company will be growing. Furthermore, friendly group of others employees are useful to make other workers socially person. Interestingly, if a humans will be working in multicultural groups than they can get lots of knowledge about their cultures and traditions and it’s crucial to bind them in unity. For instance, The Mahinder company of spare parts in Patiala into these factory various cultures people like Sikh, Hindu, Muslim as well working together and very close with each as well as they attend the celebrations of every employees.
In my notion, a job which providing a handsome salaries, good surrounding, peaceful and social environment are best for humans for choose a company to work because these all aspects are essential for working in a industries.
In conclusion, although, higher income is best to complete human’s wishes but good atmosphere at a workplace is better for them to making friends and better working.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a company' or simply 'companies'?
Suggestion: a company; companies
...h offering jobs are necessary to select a companies to work because nowadays a majority of ...
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Line 5, column 439, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'influenced'.
Suggestion: influenced
...able. Even though the masses have often influence to see the rich living standard of weal...
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Line 9, column 89, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ncome is not essential factor to choose a industries to work but also friendly en...
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Line 9, column 89, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a industry' or simply 'industries'?
Suggestion: a industry; industries
...ncome is not essential factor to choose a industries to work but also friendly environment i...
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Line 9, column 553, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a human' or simply 'humans'?
Suggestion: a human; humans
...kers socially person. Interestingly, if a humans will be working in multicultural groups...
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Line 9, column 785, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this factory' or 'these factories'?
Suggestion: this factory; these factories
... company of spare parts in Patiala into these factory various cultures people like Sikh, Hind...
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Line 13, column 48, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'salary'?
Suggestion: salary
...otion, a job which providing a handsome salaries, good surrounding, peaceful and social ...
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Line 13, column 212, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ll aspects are essential for working in a industries. In conclusion, althoug...
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Line 13, column 212, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a industry' or simply 'industries'?
Suggestion: a industry; industries
...ll aspects are essential for working in a industries. In conclusion, although, higher i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2411.0 1615.20841683 149% => OK
No of words: 474.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0864978903 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75221057886 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502109704641 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 742.5 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5617173924 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.733333333 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231129127552 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795638275734 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410388368753 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138684797916 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158425923452 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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