There are some laws, which are imposed restrictions for teenagers to go out without their parents in some cities of the US. Although there are some benefits in this curfew, I personally believe that it could bring more disadvantages such as controlling of freedom and adding pressure on parents in unnecessary situations.
To begin with, decreasing the number of threats of going out without parents is the aim of these laws. Threats like rubbery or rape are on the rise in modern societies, which could endangered adolescents. If parents accompanied their children when they want to go out at night, fewer criminals dare to commit a crime. Therefore, these cities might be safer for young people.
On the other hand, such laws could decline people’s liberty. Sense of being controlled by the government is felt by those young men, which could lead to disobeying the rules because of the human need for freedom. For instance, the newspaper reported that controlling laws is broken by most of people. As well as this, because of today’s demanding lifestyle in many situations parents are not free to be with their teenagers at night, so these rules put an extra burden on their parents.
To conclude, although these curfew’s goal is to protect teenagers, at the same time, in reality, it has more drawbacks. In my opinion, it is more practical to let people decide how to go out in the night.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...rted that controlling laws is broken by most of people. As well as this, because of today&apos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9243697479 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78167762084 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596638655462 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6985557913 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244339067253 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811494060654 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555262292952 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144950355533 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219524404195 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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