This topic raises the contentious issue that boredom arises from a lack of imagination and self-motivation. Also, the opening statement claims that though boredom is often expressed with a sense of self-satisfaction, it should really be a source of embarrassment. Indisputably, there are phases in an individual's life where a lack of imagination and self-motivation to find the next big thing of their growth trajectory creeps in. Perhaps one of the reasons for this complacency is a feeling developed due to the abundance of advancements in technology with multiple products available for each service unlike the past. In short such level of convenience inhibits many individuals to try something new and leave it to the rest of the world to solve.
Products like Whats-app for instant communication, E-commerce platforms like Amazon.com for online shopping and none other than Google for discovery of the most unthinkable at the click of a button. Nevertheless, every individual should strive to improve and excel, and make life meaningful with whatever the resources available besides being apathetic to the embarrassment which author thinks by and large for being bored. Thus, I generally disagree with the opinion that boredom is a source of embarrassment and would argue that it arises from a lack of imagination and self-motivation.
Firstly, boredom arises in an individual largely when a task is done with a sense of lack of purpose over a prolonged duration mostly. Imagination takes back seat when one turns apathetic to the role they are playing. I would like to point that not all people are self-motivated till the time they find a meaning in the job they have to accomplish. It is human nature that one wants to succeed and get approbation for the same. For example - a batsman might feel bored due to a change in its batting order, he/she may be performing outstandingly at one position but the change in position may result in an ephemeral boredom. The player can still definitely imagine for his contribution at that position and feel motivated despite the transition from the coveted position.
Secondly, an individual might feel self-satisfied at some age and be bored due to a lack of social circle as well. For example - a retired officer may feel self-satisfied for his decades long service, must have displayed all sorts of imagination and motivation at work but no more feels the need to do it. It is no way that he should feel embarrassed and his boredom is quiet justified due to a lack of social circle which perhaps might exist for other reasons. People often feel better alone till the time they find congenital peers with whom they can be candid and do away with their monotony in their style or preference. Hence, these evidences demonstrate that lack of imagination and self-motivation can still co-exist without boredom.
Today's competitive world seems to be heading in a direction where the survival of the fittest looks apt. Admittedly,a constant innovation, unparalleled motivation and the courage to dare the unthinkable is required to sustain and grow at-least in a few trades. For example - It is inevitable for a creative director of an advertising company to stay abreast in all these arenas. Their is no room for boredom, amidst the jungle of creative thinking, as one learns and unlearns at an unprecedented pace. However, the above argument does not constitute a sufficient claim that dearth in imagination and self-motivation begets boredom. Right to live is a fundamental right of each human and one shouldn't feel embarrassed for his/her choices that suits his/her desired needs. Both a teacher and a scientist find their ways of imagination in their respective professions and stay motivated. There are phases where they revitalize themselves by taking breaks and bring forth new ideas.
To conclude, although the world will embrace success marked by constant momentum of innovations and an unending expectations of a hyper-competitive race. To some, expression of boredom as a self-satisfaction might appear a source of embarrassment but that does not hold true in all cases. There is a diminishing marginal utility for each activity as per economics which leads to phase of a lack of imagination and self-motivation for every individual. I disagree partially basis these evidences shared that lack of imagination and motivation account for boredom. There is an opportunity cost of being motivated and full of imaginative ideas every-time which not all are ready to pay and they better feel content to live with their peace.
- Claim While boredom is often expressed with a sense of self satisfaction it should really be a source of embarrassment Reason Boredom arises from a lack of imagination and self motivation 68
- In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement 50
- Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... feel content to live with their peace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, for example, in short, by and large, in all cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 14.8657303371 222% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.3162921348 203% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 106.0 58.6224719101 181% => OK
Nominalization: 41.0 12.9106741573 318% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3840.0 2235.4752809 172% => OK
No of words: 746.0 442.535393258 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14745308311 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.22618413065 4.55969084622 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14098833583 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 356.0 215.323595506 165% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477211796247 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 1231.2 704.065955056 175% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.693960547 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 120.0 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3125 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.59375 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 5.13820224719 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344294862906 0.243740707755 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100321100785 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126101102331 0.0758088955206 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212516173192 0.150359130593 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112687624407 0.0667264976115 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 180.0 100.480337079 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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