Using cell phones and computers made communication among people much easier. As a result, letter writing could be lost in the future.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
In this modern and technology savvy world, majority of people prefer to use electronic devices such as mobile phones and computers to communicate with each other. As there are many advantages of using digital devices over hand written letters, the letter writing trend is on the verge of existence. In my opinion, I totally agree to the view that technology has made communication much easier.
It is true that we are living in the advanced technological era these days, where we could easily get lots of information from the internet, communicate with each other using mobile phones and chat with family and friends with instant messengers. The technology has changed the way people communicate with each other, as with these electronic devices, we could get connected with our friends, families and relatives instantly. Furthermore, more and more people are utilizing these advanced communication systems, as the devices are becoming more user-friendly, these days, and as a result, the cost of communication is becoming cheaper.
There are number of compelling reasons for people to prefer mobile phones and computers instead of orthodox way of writing letters to communicate. One of the key reason is the user-friendly and fast mode of delivering your messages. For instance, if I want to wish my friend residing in Australia on his birthday, I can just send him a message over the phone or email, which gets delivered to him instantly. Secondly, the cost of communicating through electronic devices is way to cheaper than sending hand written letters. For example, the courier services takes a lot of money and time to deliver your letters to other postal areas. Moreover, it is an eco-friendly way of communicating, without using papers and cutting trees.
In conclusion, factors likes cost effectiveness, user friendliness and instant communication, has led people to prefer using electronic devices over orthodox letter writing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33656957929 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00368313624 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546925566343 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2831521994 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.846153846 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229651235937 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843712229757 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591314826955 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12906952721 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699312694649 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.