Longer life spans and improvements in the health of elder people suggest that people over the age of 65 can continue to live full and active lives. In what ways can society benefit from the contribution that old people can make?
There is voluminous articles about how young people is the driving force of the society progress. Unfortunately, seldom so those articles focus on the contribution of the elderly people. Pensioners, on the contrary, are often considered as an unwelcome group that always require to the taken cared of. However, contributions of the old tend to be easily neglected or forgotten. Actually, our society benefits from the old people in various ways.
To begin with, the elderly people helps to preserve the traditional culture and local customs. Facing the increasingly integrated world, the young peop...
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There is voluminous articles about how young people is the driving force
There are voluminous articles about how young people are the driving force
seldom so those articles focus on the contribution of the elderly people.
seldom do those articles focus on the contribution of the elderly people.
the young people has been assimilated
the young people have been assimilated
older people brings about cohesion and harmony
older people bring about cohesion and harmony
Sentence: It is true that young and middle-aged group tend to go extreme and conduct radical behavior.
Description: The fragment group tend to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace tend with verb, past tense
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.15 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.26 7.5
"Sentence Length SD is low" means that the essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 303 350
No. of Characters: 1558 1500
No. of Different Words: 176 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.172 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.142 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.798 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 122 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 93 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.15 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.26 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.31 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.483 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.078 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5