Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the advent of the development society, unpaid community service is a vital part of high school programmes. In my opinion, i strongly agree that high school programmes should have unpaid community service.
There are some reason why i believe the future of high school students will significantly improve. First of all, students who working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood, ect will sharply increase their soft skills. This unpaid community service gives them more knowledge, experience to deal with lots of problems in life. Secondly, it will significantly grown their relationship. Friendship will be stronger, they can makes new friends when pupils works together in a team.
Moreover, students health is getting better because they invole in activities programmes outdoors. For examples, working for a charity will require a healthy person to able completes all the tasks. Futhermore, pupils who having a trouble physical will take lots of your energy so your body will need food in order to work.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that unpaid community should definitely add into high school programmes for the students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 179.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45251396648 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83318997784 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642458100559 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.9912742854 49.4020404114 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.7272727273 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236253967599 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987317132916 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113354526507 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179529526965 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136838194042 0.056905535591 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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