In inquiry field, beginner make more contribution than experts
A beginner is likely to make important contributions in any field of inquiry, however, it would not be justifiable to believe that he is more likely to contribute than experts. experts have their own set of characteristics which will help them to make important contributions. therefore, both, beginners and experts, have certain advantages and disadvantages in the field of inquiry.
Let's begin with the importance of a beginner in any field of inquiry. A beginner, who has just arrived in a field of inquiry, is likely to be very enthusiastic about his work. hence, this quality helps him work hard and be more passionate about his work, and make him give his 100% efforts in his field. Moreover, a beginner is very eager to perform well and make a mark in his field, which has both, positive and negative consequences. For example, a detective who has just entered the field, is likely to work eagerly to find more evidence and will take any steps necessary to find the clues. however, in this process, he is also more likely to take decisions rashly without giving much consideration, thereby, resulting in dangerous consequences. Another example is a scientist who has entered the field of biology, who is very eager to make an important contribution to the field of biology. Thus, he is likely to work twice as hard as other experts who have already established themselves in the field of biology. however, the junior scientist, who is not yet experienced, does not have the expertise of a senior scientist, which can result in the junior scientist publishing a theory, without performing thorough testing and fact check. therefore, it can lead to widespread embarrassment if his theory is proven invalid. Although, these qualities cannot be generalized to all beginners, these characteristics are more likely to be found in beginners than experts. hence, beginners can make important contributions to their field if they show maturity in their decision making and work hard towards achieving their goals.
Alternatively, when we look at experts in any field of inquiry, they have already established themselves, in their respective fields of study. hence, it can lead to a behavior of egotism or haughtiness which can affect their work negatively. however, if they do not develop these qualities, they can use their expertise and maturity to help make greater strides in their respective fields of work. hence, it would lead to many important contributions to help the society and mankind towards development and evolution. For example, scientists who had experience of many years in the field of astronomy, recently found a star which is closer to the earth than the sun, and this star can have some major effects in determining the history of our planet. therefore, such ground breaking theories can be developed by these experts, more likely than the beginners in the field of inquiry.
To summarize, it is important for experts and beginners to work together, to help mankind in making further strides towards future development and growth of our planet. hence, both beginners and experts have desirable qualities which will help them in making important contributions in any field of inquiry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2709.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 526.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15019011407 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94563451766 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.408745247148 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 844.2 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1973781501 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.782608696 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8695652174 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69565217391 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359476026679 0.243740707755 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12244807957 0.0831039109588 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874941795228 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286522107255 0.150359130593 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054539198923 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.