You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you.
Write a letter to your friend. In the letter
give details about the concert
describe how you won the tickets
explain why you've chosen your friend to go with you.
Dear Mike,
I hope this letter finds you in the pink of health. I'm writing to give you the exciting news that I've recently won two tickets to the Eminem concert in Dubai, and I would like to invite you to come with me.
The concert is going to be held in the Grand stadium Dubai on Sunday, 28th Oct 2019 at night, where he will perform for 5 hours. I've heard that he will perform the latest songs from his newly released album. Regarding the tickets, you'd be amazed to find out that I didn't buy it, but won those from a lottery. Last month, I purchased a refrigerator, where I qualified for a chance to win 2 Eminem concert tickets.
Since, our childhood you've always loved, and followed Eminem and have made several cover videos of his songs. Besides, it will be an excellent chance for us to meet and have a nice trip together abroad. Owing to these reasons, I would like you to come with me to this concert. I really hope you can take out some time from your busy schedule for this concert.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Warm wishes,
Tom
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ring from you soon. Warm wishes, Tom
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, really, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.335 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14592054839 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2423159474 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.25 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250730683591 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850592333021 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881279784784 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167905691145 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996206124137 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.