Leaders must possess honesty, integrity, determination, and problem-solving capabilities. The given statement compares two schools of thoughts, one is inclined towards cooperation is required for leaders to become successful whereas, another side leaned towards competition is necessary for a leader's success. It is important that a leader should have cooperativeness and healthy competitiveness to achieve success.
Firstly, leaders must be competitive so that they can be ahead of time and take strategic decisions that will help their team, their country, or their company. Leaders must be provident about their needs and about their actions. Currently, there is fierce race is going on in the smartphone market. Every Silicon company leader is fighting with others to making the best out of it. This competition is not only helpful for their industry but also helpful for customers. They are getting good service in a technology better price. Also, technology turn-around time is also getting lower which is also speeding up the innovations. Therefore, competition between leaders helps us to deliver better results.
Furthermore, leaders must engage in healthy competition as unhealthy competition is unethical and also against trading principles. Many large manufacturers keep the prices of their products low so that they can destroy small manufacturers and increase their market share. Such immoral practices lead to a biased environment and it kills opportunities for new entrants. Hence, leaders must work with empathy and integrity during competitive environment.
Finally, leaders must cooperate with each other to solve arduous problems ahead of human race. Currently, the world is facing issues such as global warming, nuclear proliferation, and world peace. Such problems can be solved by cooperation between global leaders. Competition in solving such problems is not helpful because actions from all individuals are expected. Thus, cooperation important to solve the problems which require global efforts.
In conclusion, from above all examples, leaders must collaborate to solve difficult problems which in infront of humanity. Leaders also compete with each other to provide better products and services to common people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
... towards competition is necessary for a leaders success. It is important that a leader ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 268.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7723880597 5.05705443957 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06158251244 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626865671642 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8283419477 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7647058824 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234629276607 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771620308556 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610049195262 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128453345424 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484226111587 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.89 12.1639044944 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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