moon theory
different theories were suggested for how moon formed in the passage while in lecture it is explained that why these theories are not adequate. The speaker contradicts the author with regards to lunar formation theories by giving specific reasons and examples.
Firstly, the speaker points out that as per author, moon was formed by fission. In early age of earth moon might be rapidly spinning. A piece of earth form pacific ocean would have sperated forming moon. The speaker states that this is missconception. In reality, it was not possible. Such fisson could shatter earth. Furthermore, he gave evidence of Apollo mission. composition of rocks collected by them were completly different that earth rock.
Secondly, he opposes the co-acceration theory. earth and moon are sisters formed during Nebula interstelar event. he clarifies in practice if these two have formed during this event, it would have same core composition. earth have 50%n iron whereas moon have 25% iron as their core material. Additionally he said that gravitional force will have fused them together by using dust and gas.
Thirdly, the speaker denies the validity of the point that avered in the passage. Giant impact theory suggest that some mars sized planed striked earth 4.5 billion years ago. it created many pieces, later they fused to form moon. it is quiet contray. speaker contradicts this theory by saying that. if thi had happened in past moon will not be same as today. it must be like different pieces. moon has its own biochemical process. it is harder than earth.
speaker sugessts that much reserch needed because none of these theory is convencing. Hence after this holistic analysis speaker luucidly substantiates his points of view with cogency.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Different
different theories were suggested for how moon fo...
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Suggestion: Composition
...re, he gave evidence of Apollo mission. composition of rocks collected by them were complet...
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Suggestion: Earth
...y, he opposes the co-acceration theory. earth and moon are sisters formed during Neb...
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...earth and moon are sisters formed during Nebula interstelar event. he clarifies i...
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...ormed during Nebula interstelar event. he clarifies in practice if these two have...
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Suggestion: cored
...d during this event, it would have same core composition. earth have 50%n iron where...
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Suggestion: Additionally,
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...used to form moon. it is quiet contray. speaker contradicts this theory by saying that....
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Suggestion: If
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...in past moon will not be same as today. it must be like different pieces. moon has...
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Suggestion: Moon
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... process. it is harder than earth. speaker sugessts that much reserch needed becau...
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Line 17, column 59, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this theory' or 'these theories'?
Suggestion: this theory; these theories
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Suggestion: Hence,
...use none of these theory is convencing. Hence after this holistic analysis speaker lu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, whereas, while, as for, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 284.0 270.72406181 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20774647887 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53891308376 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 145.348785872 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 419.366225166 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 13.0662251656 199% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 21.2450331126 47% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0421794213 49.2860985944 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.8846153846 110.228320801 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.9230769231 21.698381199 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.11538461538 7.06452816374 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 4.19205298013 453% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 20.0 4.27373068433 468% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33279535665 0.272083759551 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799367947858 0.0996497079465 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934703727773 0.0662205650399 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197299730818 0.162205337803 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119751333177 0.0443174109184 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.3589403974 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 53.8541721854 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.0289183223 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.75 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 63.6247240618 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.7273730684 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.498013245 57% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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