Some people say that wearing uniform is necessary for all students when they are at School while another complain that it is not necessary to do so give your opinion about this statement

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Some people say that wearing uniform is necessary for all students when they are at School while another complain that it is not necessary to do so give your opinion about this statement

I strongly agree with the idea :" wearing uniform is necessary for all students when they are at school "

Firstly , wearing uniform encourages students to be proud of being students of their school because they are wearing uniform with labels bearing their school's name. Secondly , wearing uniform can save money and time . Each morning or each day , students don't need to decide what to wear , they simply get dressed in their uniform. Furthermore , wearing uniform helps us feel equal in many ways , whether they are rich or poor . In addition, everyone wearing the same uniform allows students to be easily identified. If everyone was wearing different clothes , nobody would know where a students was from. And when you wearing uniform you look not scruffy . In conclusion wearing uniform is necessary for all students when they are at school.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12230215827 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43754471778 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625899280576 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 69.40235947 43.030603864 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 5.23603664747 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345139239342 0.215688989381 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169552476169 0.103423049105 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146178610293 0.0843802449381 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319845280485 0.15604864568 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197841776289 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.