Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In modern life we have today, everything has become more complicated. As a result, it is important for people, especially the younger ones, to have the ability to plan and organize. In what follows, I will delve into the most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
First of all, with the advent of technology, every aspect of our life is affected. We don't have a simple lifestyle that people had in the past. Nowadays, people have gained more abilities and skills, therefore finding a job has become more competitive than in the past. It is important for teenagers to have the ability to plan their future career from a young age. Therefore they can develop their skills sooner and will be experts and talented candidates for their future job opportunities. My own experience demonstrates this concept. When I was a high school student, I had a plan for my future, and I organized my education toward my future plan. I started learning computer programming from the age of twelve and I continued training until now. Now I can find a job much easier than my fellow friends since I have planned my career since my young ages and now I am experienced in my field. Had I not started planning my future career from a young age, I would not have been able to get job offers quickly.
Moreover, one aspect that is affected in modern life is transportation. Our cities have expanded, and distances are now longer. People usually use metro and buses for transportation, and so do young people. They should arrive at school on time, while their house could be miles away from the school. Therefore, it is essential for youngsters to know the train and buses schedules exactly and organize their schedules accordingly. If they miss a bus or train, they will probably miss their first class at school, due to the long distance between their house and school. Accordingly, young people need to have a plan for their daily routines in order to do everything on time.
In a conclusion, it is crucial for teenagers to know how to plan and organize. This is due to the fact that modern life is complicated, and they need to determine their future career path from that age. Additionally, in order to catch up school and public transportation, they need to be organized.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76202531646 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77157499344 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493670886076 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7852200873 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.7826086957 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1739130435 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52173913043 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 3.4128256513 440% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206522635655 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701314495642 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586818055739 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135541922227 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339144831973 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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