Environmental issues are always debatable and causing controversial discussions. One of these topics is which is the most serious problem nowadays that human beings are facing, losing species diversity or other natural crises such as pollution and global warming? In my opinion, even though the former is deserving attention, the later is more crucial and should be paid more attention.
The unbalanced ecological system is an unneglectable problem. As a part of nature and an element in the ecosystem, human beings are negatively impacted by the loss of particular creatures. For instance, in the 80s of the last century, overharvesting in the fishing industry on the east coast of China caused the extinction of a few productive fishes, which directly resulted in the unemployment of thousands of fishers in that area. Therefore, breaking species balance adversely influences human beings as a fragment in the environmental circle.
However, compared to the disappearance of some certain animals or plants, there are environmental issues more vital, including but not limited to pollution and global warming. Pollution results in deterioration of air and water quality, which closely connects to everyone's daily life and health conditions. Similarly, global warming worsens the weather and climate, as well as other natural aspects liking drought, flood or hurricanes. Moreover, unlike the diminishing of certain species that is regionally unbeneficial to people, pollution and global warming affect the whole world in a disadvantageous way. From this angle of point, these kinds of damage to nature require more urgent precautions and actions to improve the situation.
In conclusion, to emphasize again, although unbalanced species is a big environmental issue, other natural problems like pollution and global warming are more significant and need immediate solutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Consider replacing "in a disadvantageous way" with adverb for "disadvantageous"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63028169014 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09747699225 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602112676056 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7726370642 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169456299905 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576154881063 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402728314752 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107031338049 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239279315398 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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