Families have a crucial role in young people lives specifically in young decision. But I think, the families' impacts are declining and young people are more capable to make decision about their lives rather than past. Since, they have more opportunity for financial independence; they are more informed than past generations. In addition, they are more up to date than their parents.
First, these days, people are capable to earn money from various ways. There are plenty and different jobs in job market. While, in past decades, The great majority of young people worked in their families' farms and they were dependent to thier families job opportunities. But, these days young people can easily find jobs, thus they are able to earn money and experience. They learn how they solve their problems in working places with others. Therefore, these young people rely on less their parents and they are more capable to make decision better than past generations.
Second, these days, young people have more information and knowledge than past. Knowledge and information are contributing factors for making decision. These days, most of the children attend to schools and they learn plenty stuff from schools. In better words, nowadays the number of children are going to schools is more than past. Also, the education system has progressed during decades and schools are able to train better and more conscious students. Furthermore, these days there are countless media and digital sources that help young people for making decision. On the other words, young people access plenty people that guide them better than parents, while in past young people just talked with their parents and they did not have other sources for making decision. Hence, young people have are more capable to comprehend the issues to make decision.
Third, in modern days the pace of changing is more accelerated than past. There are countless changes and improvements in technology, sciences and even lifestyles. Young people know that they know more about stuff better than their parents. For example, when I wanted to choose data science for my graduate studying in university, I did not talk with my parents. Since, I knew that they have no information about the data science, because this is a new field. Therefore, young people prefer to make decision based on their information and they do not talk with their parents about some their decisions.
Consequently, these days are more capable to make decision rather than past.
- TPO-45 Integrated Writing Task 3
- Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TPO 48 Writing IndependentDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 73
- TPO 39 - Independent taskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- T O E F L - T P O 34 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 803, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, second, so, therefore, third, thus, while, for example, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2110.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15892420538 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43728125318 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422982885086 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8141745426 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.36 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346937121872 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120255101286 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104987690288 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228857505528 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504549613081 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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