people today spend too much time on personel enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather then doing thins they should do. Do you agree or disagree with following statements.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nderpresure of capatilizm which is force us to work more, gives us less money. Du...
^^
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s us less money. Due to the fact that I cant agree with this statetments, and my sev...
^^^^
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...ant agree with this statetments, and my several reason for this, having no time for personal e...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'harder than'?
Suggestion: harder than
... no time for personal enjoment, working harder then past and making low income to spent. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...e for personal enjoment, working harder then past and making low income to spent. ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... no time for personel enjoment. In these days technology rapily grow, and most of...
^^
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...o time for personel enjoment. In these days technology rapily grow, and most of the...
^^^^
Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...e of this stituation, have to work more then it use to. They have improve their abil...
^^^^
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'uses'?
Suggestion: uses
...s stituation, have to work more then it use to. They have improve their ability to ...
^^^
Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
... to work more then it use to. They have improve their ability to find a job or making m...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 501, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rsonely. For intance, Iam working Isbank , which is the biggest bank in Turkey, th...
^^
Line 3, column 629, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...nt to get upgrade to my position ı have get 85 point from the toefl, so ın my free ...
^^^
Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'harder than'?
Suggestion: harder than
...y about toefl test. Secondly working harder then the past is crucial attraction. Usually...
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Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'harder than'?
Suggestion: harder than
...force to tecnology, so you have to work harder then before because you can eaisly lost your...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 142, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...o tecnology, so you have to work harder then before because you can eaisly lost your...
^^^^
Line 4, column 214, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ly lost your job. Human right are dying everyday, even ıf you work harder you having les...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 280, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... harder you having less money, companys dont want to give your extra hours payment, ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 367, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , to
...ically you working more to keep your job,to examplify; one of my friends working in...
^^^
Line 4, column 503, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'sleeps'.
Suggestion: sleeps
...rs in a day, besiade working she rather sleeping to having fun outside. Her company alwa...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 554, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[1]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'tell'?
Suggestion: tell
... having fun outside. Her company always say her there to many people waiting for th...
^^^
Line 4, column 643, Rule ID: DO_TO_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: Use 'due to' or 'because of' to fix spelling and readability of this sentence.
Suggestion: due to; because of
..., if you want to leave there is a door, do to the fact that she is working harder and harder to kee...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arder to keep her job. In addition to after two reason, my final reason is hav...
^^
Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... get, but this make us infilation, when the consume incearese also price effect and they ar...
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Line 5, column 572, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...ucation and for toefl test, ı could not spent that money for my personel enjoyment. ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ason ı can not agree with this statement , ın my personel liffe and my observetion...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, after all, for example, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 462.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53246753247 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24564828872 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487012987013 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.3255437147 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126674212993 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438854522444 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338220984689 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674410454023 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230658564635 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.