The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australias share of the Japanese tourist market.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The first graph illustrates information about the number of Japanese who visited other countries between 1985 and 1995. The second line graph presents more detail about the percentage of tourists to Australia from 1985 to 1994.
Overall, there was an upward trend in the amount of foreign tourists from Japan. However, although the number of visitors to australia looks proportional to the number of people visiting other countries, there are downward trends in between years and ending years.
Between 1985 and 1990, Japan saw a considerable increase in the number of people going out for vacation. The numbers which were around 5 million in 1985, went up to about 11 million in 1990. In contrast, despite, Australian share going from 2% to just under 5% by 1988, it remarkably declined in 1988 by 1% and increased to 5% by the end of 1989.
Notably, Global tourists from Japan declined by half million from the previous year in 1991. On the other hand, Australian tourism from Japan interestingly increased by around 1% in the same period. After that, the number of external visitors increased about by 5 million by the end of 1995, but australian percentage decreased by 1% between 1993 and 1994.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, look, second, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01485148515 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60605363293 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544554455446 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8726329946 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.3 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163799931849 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710887652178 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495948388697 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1098079543 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500539901544 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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