Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
“Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." Use reasons and details to support your opinion.
Today technology plays a major role in the lives of the people in different arenas extending from daily activities to even the political and economic ecosystem of any nation. With this, the internet has been identified as a source of mediator which is used in almost everything. Some people think the use of online resources to assist us has brought a positive impact while others challenges that argument heavily. In my opinion, the positive impact it has created has won over the problems or the disturbances it has created.
Firstly, internet has gifted us with a communication network where we can connect with every nook and corner of the world with a mere second delay. It has interconnected people who are living in different geographical locations to keep in touch with one another. For example, with the use of Whatsapp, Gamil and Facebook, we can share our happiness and sorrow with our closest friends or relatives who are living abroad. If not for the internet, people will have to take direct phone calls which costs higher and creates barriers for day today calling. Moreover, internet creates a network relatively less expensive which is used by many all around the world.
Secondly, online platforms provide us with the access to knowledge hubs. There are a large number of websites which support the free access to information which is important to uplift the education system of a country. When we are doing academic research, it is important to identify the current trends, related work and the possible extensions of projects. This required extensive reading of research papers in various journals such as IEEE. This has been only possible with the internet connection that we have. If not, different labs will be doing the same research reinventing the wheel wasting the valuable time of a researcher. Furthermore, the online access to information has arose interest of people to learn more and hunt for knowledge to keep in touch with up to date research.
Additionally, the daily activities have become convenient and effective with the widespread of internet services specially in buying and selling, banking. This has brought all the services right to the door step. We are given the opportunity to order what we want may be grocery items to even business sales of million dollars with just one click. Thus, it has made the entire business process more effective and even profitable to all of us.
In conclusion, internet has created a global network supporting to develop close relationships, acquire knowledge and to make their day today work convenient. This has showed that the positive effect it has created has been of paramount importance to the entire mankind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...the access to knowledge hubs. There are a large number of websites which support the free access ...
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Line 5, column 685, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'arisen'.
Suggestion: arisen
...e, the online access to information has arose interest of people to learn more and hu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2259.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06502242152 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71994812422 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531390134529 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3733845193 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.681818182 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04545454545 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18901786773 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538010193561 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379792079876 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104132131661 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336995773567 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.