The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for building industries
The given flow-chart describes how bricks are produced for building industry.
Overall, there are total 7 Processes involved in the production of bricks, beginning with digging of clay and ending with delivery of bricks.
To begin, the clay which is used in manufacturing of brick is dug up using a big digger. This clay is now placed onto a mental grid to break down large particle of clay. A roller help is taken in this process
Following this, a mixture of sand and water is added into clay. And this mixture is turned into brick by either placing it into a mould or using a wire cutter. Next these brick are stored in dry oven for 1-2 days.
In the subsequent stages, there bricks go through heating and cooling process. First, these bricks are kept in a kiln at a moderate temperature and then at a high temperature (200 degree C to 1300 degree C ) after heating these bricks are placed in cooling chamber for 2-3 days. Finally, these bricks are packed and delivered to their destination.
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. 67
- Being a celebrity - such as famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems? 73
- The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for building industries 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...emperature 200 degree C to 1300 degree C after heating these bricks are placed in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47366027987 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604519774011 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8558653149 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261507397009 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104134596592 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674574498626 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131833253561 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504356535744 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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