Each person has his own definition about the happiness but there is no doubt that everybody agrees with this statement that having friends is a contributing factor for happiness. Some people are happy with some few close friends during their lives, while some people enjoy being be friend with plenty new people. In my opinion, people need to old friends rather than various and plentiful new friends for happiness. Since, not only we can express our feeling with our close friends but also, we are more comfortable with old friends. In addition, old friends help to each other more than new friends.
First, Most of the people are emotional and they need to express her intrinsic feeling with a close and old friend. In better words, we cannot talk about somethings with our new friends and we would rather to talk with a close friend. For instance, we can just express some feeling about a person that we love her. We think that we need somebody to listen to our words and feeling that she/he would be familiar with us for years. Take another example, sometimes we need to talk with a close friend about our families and parents’ conditions. Therefore, a close friend helps us to balance our feeling during time and they are vital for happiness.
Second, we are more comfortable with our old friends and we do not care about some restrict social traditions, while we should pay attention to our behavior when we meet new friends. Sometimes, we act for new friends and we cannot behave like our close friends. For example, some people are greedy and want to eat some junk foods, but when they go to restaurant with new friends, they try to eat less and healthy foods, since they want just to show off that they have a healthy lifestyle. In better words, we are more honest with our old friends, we feel more comfortable when we are spending time with them.
Third, when we are in distress and hard situations, close friends more likely to help us than new friends. Take financial distress as an example, when we are in financial distress, just our close friends lend us money. For instance, when I was admitted for graduate in a top university, I decided to buy a new laptop for myself. My close and old friend, Bob, wan in a foreign country, so I asked most of my friend money, but no one helped me. Next to weeks, finally Bob came back and he lent me money. Therefore, old friend are like family members and they support their friends in predicaments.
In a nutshell, although making friends with new people is interesting and we can learn many things from new people, just our close friends are a good supporter in terrible situations and we can trust to o friends for expressing our feelings
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, third, while, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2230.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64583333333 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41738135984 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.429166666667 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2463413433 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.363636364 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95454545455 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207147711879 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883107645677 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471519217793 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15374507345 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573911896782 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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