You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to show my interest in participating the four days conference on Data science and its future by Dr. Tam Young. Let me explain what details I will needing the following sections.
The Data science holds a greater perspective in all our future and I would like to attend the conference in-order to get more insights from one of the greatest in the field , Dr. Young. Please consider this letter as formal request to be a part of this conference.
I know that the conference is going to be conducted for four days at the end of the next quarter in Singapore, but I would like you to share the following information: The dates of the program , Session wise details , where I would be accommodated during the conference and the total cost of attending the conference.
Please share all the information as soon as possible so that I can plan my trip well in advance. Awaiting your reply.
Thank you,
Balaprasanth P
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to show my inte...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...ung. Let me explain what details I will needing the following sections. The Data s...
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Suggestion: ,
...ts from one of the greatest in the field , Dr. Young. Please consider this letter ...
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...uest to be a part of this conference. I know that the conference is going to b...
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...ng information: The dates of the program , Session wise details , where I would be...
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...e. Awaiting your reply. Thank you, Balaprasanth P
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, well, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80952380952 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79156320773 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.1127027071 44.8134815571 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 101.0 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151138518105 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523611212308 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473110695116 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779455906881 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542203506226 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.