Nowadays, more and more ancient energy production system like fossil fuel industry has been replaced by the newer system like alternative energy industry, whether the advantage overcomes the disadvantage has generated a hot debate. I hold the opinion that we can largely benefit from this new alternative energy than the older one.
To the one hand, using the alternative energy is a new way of energy production so the price will be much higher than the older one. Before we have got used to producing a large amount of energy in a lower price so it seems difficult to accept that the energy price will skyrocket. Many energy companies have not prepared for that change and consumers also will be challenged by this higher price. For instance, the yellow jacket mouvement in France is a good example. People who just have a miserable salary to support their life could not afford the price to pay for the gasoline, so they have to go to the street to manifest in order to the gain the attention of the government. If we order them to accept the alternative energy, they will probably have more problems to meet theirs needs.
To the other hand, with the use of alternatif energy, our environment will be definitely improved due to the reduction of the carbon dioxide. As we all know, our planate is suffering every day because of the fossil fuels, and the global temperature increases every year as the ozonosphere has been broken by the effet of carbon dioxide, so it is essential for us to find a solution to protect our environment and the alternatif energy must be the best way. Moreover, Wind power and solar power are both environment-friendly since they just use the nature's power to generate powerful energy for human being. With the acceleration of the use of alternative energy, we could not only make sure that the demand of energy will not be influenced but also the creation of pollution will be largely reduced.
Overall, although alternatif energy as a new born will undoubtedly provides us a big advantage of creation of a new way of living, we should also consider other factors too, like the price and some weather limitations. It will be a slow stage to change the two totally different energy system, and we should abandon the fossil fuels little by little in order that people’s daily life will not be affected.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 68, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...f energy as a new born will undoubtedly provides us a big advantage of creation of a new...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79310344828 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69343731627 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490147783251 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.1551711937 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.0 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125850872088 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524145005705 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507330787305 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763432283624 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056675605989 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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