the chart below shows the percentage of male and female who did various free-time activities in England in 2006
The bar chart gives information about the proportion of people who spend their leisure time on different activities by genders in England in 2006.
Overall, while watching TV group had the highest figures for both genders, the lowest figure was playing computer games. The percentage of women who were in the spending time with friends and shopping categories were higher than that of men, whereas men were higher than in the remaining categories.
In 2006, about 85% of women spent their time on watching TV, which was slightly lower than that of men by nearly 2%. While the percentage of women who spent time with friends and shopping were at roughly 85% and 75%, those of men were lower, at around 80% and 35%, respectively.
In addition, the percentage of English men who liked doing sport/exercise and reading in their free-time was around 75%, which was higher that of the counterparts, at roughly 70%. It was around 73% of the male groups interested in using the Internet, while the remaining gender was just around 45%. Finally, only 10% of men was in the playing computer games group compared to 5% of women.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-10-15 | nguyenduchuy2705 | 82 | view |
| 2019-07-20 | quynhan1995 | 49 | view |
- Many people are now spending more and more time travelling to work or school Some people believe that this is a negative development while others think there are some benefits Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes when set free What are the reasons What can be done to solve the problem 61
- Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain But others say films should have educational value Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Nowadays many people cannot read or write What problems does this cause What measures can governments take to solve these problems 95
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pent time with friends and shopping were at roughly 85% and 75%, those of men wer...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86979166667 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52061272278 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526041666667 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6757233004 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.875 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168283474435 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789512524095 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740185800263 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122823331783 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715012521624 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.