The gragh below gives information from 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The graph shows clearly the report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
Overall, he consumption of energy in USA from 1980 to 2015 has sightly increased. Petrol and oil have much increased from 1995 to 2005. While coal and natural gas were slightly fluctuation between 1985 to 2005. Beside that nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower remained steady from 1995 to 2005.
In 2010, the consumption of energy growth steady expect for hydropower did not change much. It was predicted that the number of consumption of energy in USA will be gradually growth from 2020 to 2030 specially for coal, petrol and oil but natural gas, nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower are expected to no changing in the future.
Through that we can see in our future life not only a lot of energy will be consumed but also a lot of contamination will be spill out the environment. It is can not decline any advantages in the revolution that human was trying to use energy which served us everyday. But we need to protect our environment at the same time by declare more law about spill the toxic chemical out of the sea/river, chop off the forests which was under surveillance of the State,..etc will be harshly fine and criticize. Beside that the less we use plastic bags/cups,... the less our environment will be harm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 260, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...as trying to use energy which served us everyday. But we need to protect our environment...
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Line 11, column 461, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...hich was under surveillance of the State,..etc will be harshly fine and criticize....
^^
Line 11, column 462, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...ich was under surveillance of the State,..etc will be harshly fine and criticize. ...
^^
Line 11, column 549, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...e that the less we use plastic bags/cups,... the less our environment will be harm...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84347826087 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70079803371 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560869565217 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5585360121 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169363814551 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700521195802 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108717668758 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153628149798 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143746889532 0.056905535591 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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