Art
Art represents a culture to the world in its unique way. But at present, people are not very interested in arts as they used to be. The reason they are focusing more on science, technology and business is because people have become much more pragmatic and materialistic that they do not want to spend their time wondering about the meaning of an art piece. What could be done is to invest more in art and introduce to people how art shaped our present.
In the past, people was not as busy as they are today. They had much more free time that allowed them to appreciate arts that represent their culture as well as arts that represent other cultures. Nowadays world is much more busy and competitive. To cope in the modern age of science, technology and business, they have to focus their attention to these aspects. They simply do not have enough time to pay attention to arts which do not seem to benefit them directly.
To encourage people to take interest in art the governments should invest more in art, including art museums and exhibitions. What also can be done is to introduce art as an essential part of the education curriculum, explaining how art has contributed in developing our world. In many cases art is also behind scientific advancements, which can be included in science studies to inspire people towards art. Art can even be a business element. As a matter of fact, art business is one of the flourishing businesses in modern world. By focusing more on this, art can be appreciated through people’s interest in other more practical things.
So to conclude, it is easy to understand that due to the competitive nature life people are getting less interested in art. To improve this situation, art should be presented in a more practical way that will have the ability to benefit them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will have the ability to benefit them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as a matter of fact, as well as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74132492114 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69836156794 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488958990536 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4574365862 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4117647059 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17647058824 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.507090309409 0.244688304435 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.2248823784 0.084324248473 267% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140337117712 0.0667982634062 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.354687572943 0.151304729494 234% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124053896517 0.056905535591 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.