In the future, we will have more and more leisure time as machines replace many of the tasks we do at home and at work. Discuss the benefits this will bring
Being the witness of last few decade, we have been blessed by the numerous number of machines which aids in an array of household activity. So that we can get more leisure time as new technology replaces most of the tasks we had to do manually in home as well as work. This essay will discuss few positive points which makes our daily work easier than before.
Let's talk about the benefits of using machines for both household work as well as office use.
Firstly, for both working couple and individuals, previously it was tough to manage house hold work due to the busy schedule for entire week. Machine helps to save time. Secondly, with the invention of science, machine helps to decrease human efforts. Lastly, technology has been designed in such a way that it can always give error free outcome with complete accuracy. For example, nowadays, we are very familiar with washing machine, dryer, dishwasher which assure one to reduce human effort, saves time and accurate result with predefined programs. Previously, for cleaning dishes were too time consuming as well as it involves participation of 1-2 members regularly. Similarly, for washing clothes was a headache for individuals which takes more than hour time to get rid of stains. Additionally, food processor, mixer grinders are the wonderful and one of the best solutions for people who live to save time in order to spend it as relaxation.
In other hand, computer has become one of the crucial solution that assists from various aspects starting from huge long calculation ending with any engineering work. For instance, in earlier days, people use to work manually calculation for banking work, engineering design work.
To summarized, technology advancements brings a plethora of benefits towards mankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, lastly, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13356164384 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63855139465 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63698630137 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7359245282 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239528516564 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770147686973 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805866146336 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128174690734 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11145540867 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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