In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping.
Is this a positive or negative development?
Nowadays people prefer to go to huge department stores and shopping malls and this has resulted in the closure of considerable numbers of small local shops. Although there are some drawbacks to this trend, I would argue that it is a quite positive development.
The main drawback of the trend towards large shopping centers is that many local shop owners have decided to close down for good which has resulted in an increase in unemployment rate in local areas. Those who once used to work at local shops are now forced to travel long distances to nearby town or cities to find a job. In addition, local shops usually sell specialties and home-made products which are specific to that area and with the closure of these stores, their unique products are also going to disappear gradually.
Despite the negative points mentioned above, I believe that shopping malls have several benefits for the consumers. Firstly, customers can find a remarkably wider range of products to choose from. For example, if you visit the cheese counter at a department store, you will be amazed at the various types of cheese you could purchase. Secondly, the products at shopping malls are usually much cheaper than those at local shops because they have been purchased from producers in large scales. Last but not least, since you can find almost everything on your shopping list at large department stores, it is much more convenient and time-saving in comparison with small local stores.
In conclusion, while I recognize the probable drawbacks of consumer's tendency towards large shopping malls, I consider it to be a positive development overall.
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Comments
In recent years, many small
In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?
In the contemporary era, it is being noticed that small businesses are at a declining trend. Marts and malls have become a need, and sooner or later, the future of individual trade will vanish. As I would have maintained, indeed, it is an adverse impact on the economy as well as society. In this assessment, a few reasons will be discussed, and afterward, conclude with the final summary.
To begin with, due to a rapid shut down of tiny markets, a raised in poverty noticed. Since new huge departmental stores appeared, the significance of retail outlets futile. Unfortunately, a plethora of small investors quite from the commerce, and due to this economy suffers because accumulates of fund pull out. For example, Pakistan, where several trivial investor contributes toward the economy which brings growth in the country. Hence, repercussion symtoms may take place if large outlets capture the markets.
Moreover, Unemployment is the biggest challenge which has to face in connection with closed down sole business. Every shopkeeper normally creat one or two jobs, but when owners survive in their trades, in these circumstances, they may take harsh verdicts. The UAE, for instance, considerable retail business wipe out, and numerous people jobless. Then, unprivileged groups will further fall down in improvised situation.
On the flip side, although, well organized and stunning malls are boosting sharply, it is also spreading opportunities to consumers to buy everything under a roof. In particular, a lot of retail channels are operating in almost every eminent metropolitans at reasonable prices.
To sum up, nowadays, small enterprises are losing their recognition just because of the new entrance of considerable large chains. In best of my opinion, business are indeed expending, and competitions are essential but must dim on small trades whose bread and better just depends on retail business.
In recent years, many small
In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?
In the contemporary era, it is being noticed that small businesses are at a declining trend. Marts and malls have become a need, and sooner or later, the future of individual trade will vanish. As I would have maintained, indeed, it is an adverse impact on the economy as well as society. In this assessment, a few reasons will be discussed, and afterward, conclude with the final summary.
To begin with, due to a rapid shut down of tiny markets, a raised in poverty noticed. Since new huge departmental stores appeared, the significance of retail outlets futile. Unfortunately, a plethora of small investors quite from the commerce, and due to this economy suffers because accumulates of fund pull out. For example, Pakistan, where several trivial investor contributes toward the economy which brings growth in the country. Hence, repercussion symtoms may take place if large outlets capture the markets.
Moreover, Unemployment is the biggest challenge which has to face in connection with closed down sole business. Every shopkeeper normally creat one or two jobs, but when owners survive in their trades, in these circumstances, they may take harsh verdicts. The UAE, for instance, considerable retail business wipe out, and numerous people jobless. Then, unprivileged groups will further fall down in improvised situation.
On the flip side, although, well organized and stunning malls are boosting sharply, it is also spreading opportunities to consumers to buy everything under a roof. In particular, a lot of retail channels are operating in almost every eminent metropolitan at reasonable prices.
To sum up, nowadays, small enterprises are losing their recognition just because of the new entrance of considerable large chains. In best of my opinion, business are indeed expending, and competitions are essential but must dim on small trades whose bread and better just depends on retail business.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 937.175257732 146% => OK
No of words: 271.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05535055351 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59503271575 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 127.690721649 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59778597786 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 290.88556701 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.1395870346 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.545454545 76.5299724578 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 4.34317383033 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36205632335 0.216113520407 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127367899274 0.0766984524023 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760788253861 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198829046788 0.12726935374 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406808577772 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 8.37731958763 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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