Living a sendentary life style is becoming a norm among many professionals as they barely get enough workout during their daily working hours nor at their free periods due to the fact they have a very tight schedules and most gyms are expensive and ends up with health issues. And I believe this problems could be tackled by creating more awareness about the health implications and many companies can offer a certain percentage towards the payment for fitness facilities for their staff.
Although other several hidden factors could be responsible for not exercising adequately but time factor has always being a major culprit as many people work long shift and some even travel long distances to get to their various offices and would obviously be tired by the time they get home. For example, I work 9 long hours daily, Monday to Friday. I often get home around 9pm in the night tired and all I wanted to do was sleep as I need to be up early for work the next day. I believe this problem could be solved if people could work flexible hours and better and faster means of transportation could be made available to reduce the travelling time to and fro from work.
Another important factor is the fact that most gyms are either far from individuals homes or in most cases charge very exorbitant fees which majority could barely afford. For instance, a workout and fitness centre closest to my colleague according to her charges 1000 naira per hour just to use their training equipments. I am of the opinion that if all employers can lend their helping hands to their staff towards having a better health as par payment towards fitness gyms even if it is just 50%, it will be a welcome relief as many diseases related to poor body fitness would be averted.
In conclusion, a lot of people are proned to ill heallth because they do not exercise enough due to lack of time and in some cases unaffordable gym centres around and these issues could be resolved by having flexible working hours plus availability of good transportation to speed up tavellling time and the last but not the list is the fact that it will be awesome and a welcome relief if employers of labour could assist in part or whole of gym centres payment fees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in most cases, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65404040404 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46665730812 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535353535354 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.518417027 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.3 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.6 20.7667163134 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350417357729 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133538667665 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739126905781 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206152769943 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934400405622 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 11.3001002004 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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