The graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland between 1960 and 1995.

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The graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland between 1960 and 1995.

The line graph gives information about infected people, living on someland, by X disease over period of 35 years from 1960 to 1995.

Overall, it is clear that the number of people infected by X disease rose dramatically until the mid seventies, remained stable for 5 years, before dropping to zero in last year of given period.

At the beginning of the period, only a hundred people had X disease in someland. Any change was not reported in this figure until next 5 years. An outbreak of this illness was done, with figure rising dramatically and reaching a peak of 500 cases in 1975.

Between 1975 and 1980, someland’s condition with regard to this problem was stable. Suddenly, a good event occured ,with the number of cases of people suffering from X disease dropping to zero and remaining in this level until the end of this period.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05442176871 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59830107851 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639455782313 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3570853462 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249296543138 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105693422085 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756060568485 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147488321746 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722866655802 0.0819641961636 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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