You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.In your letter:
1- Explain why you are selling the television.
2-Describe the television.
3- Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it
Hello David,
I am writing to you because I want to let you know that I am moving out of Sydney for good.
I have many things to sell such as washing machines, hair dryer, new sofa, fridge, bed and television which I know you like it.
that tv is basically latest model of Sony smart tv what you can find on market. he is 60inches flat screen he has wi-fi, remote control, you can even control it with your smartphone. Dimension of that model are width 122mm, depth 15mm and height 80mm. I can give you wall mounted bracket for this tv as a present with him.
If you would like to see the tv once again before you make any decision please come over whenever you can on this or next week. I should be at home everyday after 6pm.
please call me before you want to come just to confirmed that the tv is still available and I am at home.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Cheers,
Tomasz
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...ision which I know you like it. that tv is basically latest model of Sony sm...
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Line 13, column 12, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'basically the latest'.
Suggestion: basically the latest
... I know you like it. that tv is basically latest model of Sony smart tv what you can fin...
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Line 13, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...y smart tv what you can find on market. he is 60inches flat screen he has wi-fi, r...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for this tv as a present with him. If you would like to see the tv once aga...
^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 149, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... this or next week. I should be at home everyday after 6pm. please call me before y...
^^^^^^^^
Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...uld be at home everyday after 6pm. please call me before you want to come just to...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, still, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 768.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43930635838 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06333283233 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676300578035 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7262317683 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27451452217 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904990440537 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063588179864 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13665061486 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283312578598 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 70.7449484536 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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