Most of the advertisements make products seem much better than they really are
Selling a specific produced product is one of the important and final steps of commercial trade. It is cristal clear that, as much as you could sell your product the highest income you will benefit from. From very long time advertising is recognize as one of the primary and essential methods of introducing a commercial object. Some people may think that advertisment decsribe the things much better than they really are. In my own perspective, I agree with the statement and I think that in advertising procedure there is a lot of exaggeration in describing the quality of the product. Following reasons and examples will elaborate on my opinion.
First of all, The company owner gives money to the advertising agency and also the media host to introduce and describe their product to the people. These agencies should illustrate the good aspect of the products to cath the audiance's opinion and convince them to buy it. There are a lot of brand of same products with increase the higher competition atmosphere among companies. Based on aforementioned reasons, it is inevitable that advertisement always have to present the quality and efficiency of the goods more that it really are to rise more selling of the product. For example, there are a lot of brand of pencils like 'Pelican','FaberCasttel', etc in all advertisment it is showed that these pencils are more durable and resiting to any kind of conditions. Despite all of this commercial media, in reality all of this pencils will be broken with single pressure.
Second, all media producers and advertisement maker, use specific visual effects and sounds to deceive people. These visual effects like adding more interesting background or using specific scenario in which the goods will seems like unimaginable and perfect things in the world will distract people's mind from the real function of the product. It seems much better because it is seems very interesting and exciting in the advertisement. Further, some advertisement agencies use celebrities to present a company production, consequently, the people convinced that this product is very perfect because an actor or singer uses it.
To summarize my reasons and examples, I strongly believe that, most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are because the company wants their products seem very perfect to increase their selling rate and win the competition between the other brands. Further, the media by using some specific techniques might deceive people to accept that the product is at a very high level of quality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'recognized'.
Suggestion: recognized
...rom. From very long time advertising is recognize as one of the primary and essential met...
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Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun brand seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of brands'.
Suggestion: a lot of brands
... and convince them to buy it. There are a lot of brand of same products with increase the high...
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Line 5, column 597, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun brand seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of brands'.
Suggestion: a lot of brands
... of the product. For example, there are a lot of brand of pencils like Pelican,FaberCasttel, e...
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Line 5, column 635, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , FaberCasttel
...e a lot of brand of pencils like Pelican,FaberCasttel, etc in all advertisment it is showed t...
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Line 5, column 819, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...his commercial media, in reality all of this pencils will be broken with single pres...
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Line 9, column 224, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
...ecific scenario in which the goods will seems like unimaginable and perfect things in...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is at a very high level of quality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, may, really, second, so, for example, i think, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2161.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16985645933 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90438504422 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488038277512 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 681.3 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0461622534 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.055555556 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363503543519 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106735144577 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12354205789 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234734152397 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110498307117 0.0645574589148 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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