Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Schooling is a necessary part of a persons life. It is integral in shaping up one's future and the future of the country . Thus it is not only the responsibility of the school but also responsibility of the nation to decide what is being taught in schools . Hence, the nation should ensure that students study the same curriculum until they enter college.
Today , while the government has a say in curriculum of a student , the topics covered depends largely on the school . This means that private schools who have better resources will be able to impart more knowledge in their students, giving them an unfair advantage in life . It is the responsibility of the nation to decide at every stage what topics are relevant for students and ensure it is taught throughout the country. That way,no student preparing for a common entrance test gets an unfair advantage.
Also sometimes schools can be biased towards a certain communities or religions which can affect the curriculum and thus the students mindset. Schools may also align the curriculum with their vision and belief . For example a school that believes in peace may omit teaching any historical events that have violent acts in them,like world war 1 or 2 , even though it is a significant part of history .If not , the same curriculum , there should be detailed guidelines given by the government , on what topics to be covered and what topics are inappropriate and can't be taught.
However , there are some students in schools who may be mentally challenged. For such special cases we would require a different curriculum , which the government has to keep in mind.
In conclusion, the nation should have one curriculum for all the students so no particular school or student gets an unfair advantage just because they are better off in life. At the same time , the nation needs to make exception for students who are mentally challenged .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, while, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 319.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00313479624 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7558981696 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514106583072 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.7185136139 60.3974514979 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107594491213 0.243740707755 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415226422036 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305962759166 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695281307372 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01284328465 0.0667264976115 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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