History tells that people have afternoon thought about creating and ideal society, but, most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society? how can we create an ideal society?
We all have been hearing about the establishment of an ideal society from the centuries, but it is becoming impossible to happen so. I would describe the ideal society, which crime-free, and people have the highest happiness index. It is just a few steps away to achieve if everyone in the world work towards the sense of equality and Unity.
The world is growing with appreciable speed in all aspects of becoming an ideal. but, I think, on an average the terrorism is delaying its rate crime must be minimized to null for the better world. 9/11, for example, the terror attack on the world's popular Twin Tower is one of the black spots in the history of the system of development. Moreover, if the government things towards the policy of 'altogether - all grow', then the dream of Ideal society is not difficult to change. So, when all individuals are satisfied and live a happy life, then I can see as an ideal society.
Although, it demands and essential steps to be taken by the government and civil lines to be the best world. Firstly, if the regulating authority implies a better employment ratio and reduced inflation rate, people would be delivered towards the work and will become socially responsible. however, this is only applicable when the concerned government is economical developed, and at the same time, people also contribute to them by paying the taxes. secondly, the discrimination in society also becomes a reason for the violation and crime. the government must work Ideally for the citizens regardless of caste, religion, color, income and so on. for example, the state of Lord Rama, Ayodhya, in history was said to be an ideal state, wherein everyone was happy with their Emperor. undoubtedly, the practices towards stated suggestions may help up to a maximum extent.
People had heard about an ideal society from the past, and they are affecting the establish the same since long ago. But up till an individual would not work towards the stated directions, it seems difficult to construct that. Feelings of equality would play a vital role to live in an ideal society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91036414566 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67442018566 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554621848739 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2374107288 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.3888888889 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291855811608 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940287953799 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828546418277 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203044895307 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607450023605 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.