With the advancement of technology, social media engross the attention of all age groups from children to elders. This question is always in controversy does social websites have risky for the interest of peoples. This essay agrees that social media websites have dangerous and a threat to the security of personal information of the people. This essay enlightens How it unsecure for personal information.
Every coin has its two sides, If there is a bright side then the other hands it has also a dark side. Social media has a negative impact on people due to both security and psychological reason. From a security perspective, an online media platform contains information like credit credential, Personal information, email, Mobile Numbers, Bank criteria of every single prospector. All data can be misused by an unauthorized institution that leads to cybercrime like misappropriation, embezzlement, corporate fraud, investment forgery, corporate data breach, personal data breach etcetera. On the contrary, from a psychological perspective, People now become more addictive to renowned websites like Instagram, Facebook, LinkedIn, etc. They spend long working hours on it which becomes the cause of the mental disturbance, eye ailments, etc.
On the other hand, where social media a bane it also have boon. The social media platform enables quick dissemination of information in a few hours. It assists in hunting a job on multiple websites. It allows to aspirants to make new connections with our kith and kins. With the help of social media, it became easier to access newspapers and magazines other useful documentaries. It gives a roof to all small business startups other enlarge organization.
To conclude, I would reiterate my opines that the advantage of social media is eclipsing its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 343, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... of personal information of the people. This essay enlightens How it unsecure for pe...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...hand, where social media a bane it also have boon. The social media platform enables...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42605633803 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09840748493 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.956386627 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6470588235 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.17647058824 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370833209603 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1164382869 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100710262596 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231419410849 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698407717118 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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