Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Jack studying in the university and representing as Head of Hostel committee. We are about 70 students staying at the hostel campus from the beginning of our University education. I am writing this letter on behalf of our committee to complain about the bad maintenance of rooms with the new vendor.
For the last first one and half year there was a good maintenance of hostel rooms and corridors and if we raise any issue, there was quick response from previous vendor. Last month there was a new vendor for maintenance department. From then, our rooms are not cleaned on d...
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there was quick response from previous vendor.
there was a quick response from previous vendor.
Before there is impact on hostel reputation.
Before there is an impact on hostel reputation.
Sentence: For the last first one and half year there was a good maintenance of hostel rooms and corridors and if we raise any issue, there was quick response from previous vendor.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, post-determiner is not usually followed by a numeral, ordinal
Suggestion: Refer to last and first
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 10
No. of Words: 191 200
No. of Characters: 877 1000
No. of Different Words: 112 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.718 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.592 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.428 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 55 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 36 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.692 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.984 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.308 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.334 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.632 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.171 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4