As As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the abillity of humans to think for themselves will surely deterioriate.
According to me this statement holds true at a greater extent. The technology relying practices has surely deteriorated the ability of humans to think.
The various technological devices and advancements were carried out after the industrial revolution. The revolution further led to the technological revolution after sometime, mainly in USA like the foundation of Apple by Steve Jobs, Microsoft by Bill Gates, Google by Larry Page and later Amazon & X.Com by Jeff Bezos and Elon Musk.
Thus, because of this various technological advancements the world developed at a much greater pace than ever thought. Space agency like NASA was founded and later in the 21st century the most used form of technology, Smartphones were developed with high tech functions. Smartphones nowadays are the part off day to day life of an individual and also the low cost internet accessible in the most extremes of the globe has also paced up the new technologies and use of smartphones. Everyday a new smartphone and a new device comes out with new advancements and a person gets really eager to buy it which also affects finances of the family nowadays.
This devices were invented to make our life easier and speed up our developement. But, "do we really use this devices to make our life easier or whether we have became dependent on this technologies?" This is the main question to the generation nowadays. The people has become so much dependent on this technologies that for example, the practice of reading books has decreased, the simple physical activities like getting a food parcel or grocery from the market is done through mobile applications.
Nowadays, if a person needs to find something he just types over google or watch a video on youtube but does not goes to library, search in the literature, etc. This things has drastically affected the learning and creative skills of new individuals . The new generation now thinks less and find more over google, they do not stress their mental abilities for that. The radiowaves from this devices also affects our body in various harmful ways like Tumours, Alzheimers,etc which should be prevented.
This all practices should be prevented for the new coming generations and various seminars and counselling should be held by experts, guidance should be given by parents to their childrens. Social awareness programmes should be held by the oraganisations to make a better future with better mental and health practices for the new generations.
Hence, "As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the abillity of humans to think for themselves will surely deterioriate." this statement holds true at a greater extent according to me and I think it will hold true for a greater population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ed out after the industrial revolution. The revolution further led to the technolog...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Com
...ogle by Larry Page and later Amazon & X.Com by Jeff Bezos and Elon Musk. Thus,...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...ew technologies and use of smartphones. Everyday a new smartphone and a new device comes...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...s finances of the family nowadays. This devices were invented to make our life ...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...velopement. But, 'do we really use this devices to make our life easier or whet...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...r watch a video on youtube but does not goes to library, search in the literature, e...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...library, search in the literature, etc. This things has drastically affected the lea...
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Line 17, column 250, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...g and creative skills of new individuals . The new generation now thinks less and ...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...abilities for that. The radiowaves from this devices also affects our body in variou...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, really, so, thus, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2351.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 452.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20132743363 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99399169988 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546460176991 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 729.0 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5948898037 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.611111111 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244703219495 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762047556576 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147059957996 0.0758088955206 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14341856623 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183304092195 0.0667264976115 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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