You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:
The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
In the past years, the rising popularity of using mobile phones has changed our way of living, communicating and working. Smartphones might be the reason for our social or health problems. In fact, phones are slightly overtaking our society and people do not live in reality. In my opinion, the negative effects outweigh the positive when it comes to using mobile phones.
Nowadays smartphones are playing an enormous role in our society and facing serious social problems. People are used to carrying their phones wherever they go and face the screen most of the time. In fact, it is ruining our social community as people are not talking with each other as much as before. Especially the younger generation is affected as they follow what others do. Playing or simply enjoying each other company is not popular anymore instead, youngsters now spend time on the phone. For example, in recent surveys in Estonia, 90% of people are watching their phones in public transport and 99% of students using it between class brakes.
Mobile phones are affecting our mental health and have a strong relation with sleeping problems. Younger people are taking a lot of courage from social media. The main big issue related to that is following others' life and outlook. These days being skinny, tanned and wearing the latest fashion are forced by social media. Young people might feel pressurized and get stressed which in turn might result in mental health like depression or starvation. In addition, it has been proofed that the blue light coming from the screen is giving our brain wrong signals about sleep, therefore, keeping us up that in the long term causes insomnia.
In conclusion, using mobile phones the disadvantages outweigh the advantages, as people are not socialized and spend more time on their phones than being in reality. Also, the younger generation follows too much social media which in turn can affect mental health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05607476636 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42648932973 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566978193146 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0487854879 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237363947858 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741008912337 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544300636005 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163854218506 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565420407972 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.