"Although many people think that the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life are
entirely harmless, they in fact, prevent people from developing into truly strong and
independent individuals."
The speaker believes that the luxuries and convenience of modern life are harmless. And, the advancement of these contemporary life impedes human to become strong and indispensable individuals. I am in conditional with the speaker’s claim. The effects on use of these contemporary advances varied upon different circumstances. The uses of technology made the human faster in it’s work, although, it has also deteriorates the human vigour. However, the use of these technology during emergency cases is highly essential, and , it also gives mental and physical relaxation to the human during that time.
Today for the small and diminutive work, we relies upon the artificial intelligence. This technology have deteriorate the habit of human. Before this types of technology like computer, mobile have developed, human have to perform each and every work manually, which will developed the think tank of the human. Now, we depend upon the google for each and every work, and for small calculation we tapped the calculator. For the simple addition and subtraction also we were depends upon these instruments. This have really deteriorates our intelligent and thinking capacity.
Majority of the hoses used different electronic devices, to make the work faster viz; vacuum pump, washing machine; and for the conviniency, they use air conditioning (ac). These types of instruments really made us lazy and boredom. We became lackadaisical in frequently using this types of equipments. It was found that people with the high user of a.c was found to be suffered with backache at the old age. Today , for the purpose of transportation, even to the nearest distance, we used the motorbike, car, bus, etc and so on. It will be really detrimental towards our near future. The frequent use of computer and mobile, with the blue rays radiates from it, creates the problem in the vision of our eye and also it’s one of the carcinogenic agent. The habit of pedestrian will really a good physical, mental and social well-being. This facilities of modern equipments and devices have made us lackadaisical and suffer from the different heal hazards like obesity, diabetes and so on.
Although, the use of these technologies enervated our life, but, it will rather supports during the emergency condition. For example, wheel chair is essential for the person who have disorder in leg and unable to walk. Morever, the treatment and medicine of the contemporary life obviates the needs of surgery. Todays, different medication and new system of treatment have increased the life expectancy of human. Different cancerous disease were treated by the use of new technology like blood culture, tissue culture, etc.
To sum up, these use of luxuries reduces the independency of human, unless the critical and necessary situation. We should rely upon this technology only in the necessities. We should try to developed the habit of eschewing from it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 470, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'these technologies'?
Suggestion: this technology; these technologies
...s the human vigour. However, the use of these technology during emergency cases is highly essent...
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Line 1, column 534, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...emergency cases is highly essential, and , it also gives mental and physical relax...
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Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'rely'
Suggestion: rely
...y for the small and diminutive work, we relies upon the artificial intelligence. This ...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'deteriorated'.
Suggestion: deteriorated
...cial intelligence. This technology have deteriorate the habit of human. Before this types o...
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... deteriorate the habit of human. Before this types of technology like computer, mobi...
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Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ery work manually, which will developed the think tank of the human. Now, we depend upon ...
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Line 9, column 413, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ered with backache at the old age. Today , for the purpose of transportation, even...
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Line 9, column 840, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...physical, mental and social well-being. This facilities of modern equipments and dev...
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Line 13, column 81, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'support'
Suggestion: support
...enervated our life, but, it will rather supports during the emergency condition. For exa...
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Line 15, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... try to developed the habit of eschewing from it.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, well, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2484.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27388535032 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94053815016 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515923566879 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 804.6 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 6.24550561798 288% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3916141965 60.3974514979 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6551724138 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2413793103 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.20689655172 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0940294443401 0.243740707755 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0284899342297 0.0831039109588 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421067920993 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0564447807144 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283953413473 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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