The diagram illustrates how steel rods are manufactured in the furniture industry.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The flowchart diagram demonstrates the manufacturing progress of steel rods in furniture industrial factory. Overall, the process is divided into 3 stage with the temperature level. Raw material is put into melt, then shaped into its form and testified the quality.
First stage, raw materials namely iron ore, yellow ore and carbon, are put together in high temperature and passed through the second stage. Firstly, we put the mixture mentioned earlier in the melting slit at around 1500 degree Celsius. Then, it is refined in smelting cabin and the candescent metal is poured in ingots.
Passing to the second stage, candescent metal in ingots is set into cool by a connected cooling reservoir which lower its temperature down to approximately 100 C. After that, the metal goes through nozzle line to casting strand. When the strands had been formed, they were rolled to significant smaller size and been through heating treatment.
The last stage occurs when it comes to the checking of quality. Measuring automaton monitors the surface of strands and sends them to cutting progress. After the strands get cut in to the actual size. The final stamping ID number takes place and finally get the inspection.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 153, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19696969697 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5959988992 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661616161616 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9494720873 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1538461538 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0409063868997 0.215688989381 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0180032564893 0.103423049105 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623651098825 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0277295240931 0.15604864568 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048028944599 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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