In todays world many families find it necessary for both parents to go outside home for work to earn money. But children feel lack of support in the absence of parents. Discuss and give your opinion.
In this materialistic world, people are running in the rat race to accomplish more and more in education, business, employment and so on. Presently, earning money is supposed to be a dire need to survive happily for both parents. By contrast, absence of parents is becoming perilous for future of their children. Here, this essay will account for both sides with my own perception.
There are multifarious points to support former view.First and foremost, earning by both parents allows to offer aristocratic lifestyle to their juveniles. For example, parents can afford expensive but luxurious el...
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it's gloomy side can not be underestimated
its gloomy side can not be underestimated
Sentence: In addition, children are likely to join bad habits such as smoking, taking drugs, physical harrassments in the absence of guardians.
Error: harrassments Suggestion: harassments
Sentence: From my opinion, although earning money is the only way to fullfil needs and dersires in this era of inflation, it's gloomy side can not be underestimated.
Error: fullfil Suggestion: fulfill
Error: dersires Suggestion: desires
Sentence: Making well balanced time schedule between work and family life, reducing number of hours can be wothwhile to 'kill the two birds with one stone'.
Error: wothwhile Suggestion: worthwhile
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 338 350
No. of Characters: 1744 1500
No. of Different Words: 211 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.288 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.16 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.703 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 139 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 108 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 72 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.778 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.85 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.285 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.513 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.034 0.07
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