Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
traveling is the best way to relieve of life's stressful. Nowadays, individuals deal with a lot issues such as pressure work, daily expenses, and so forth, so everyone need to recovery. Some people believe that journeying in a cluster directed by tour guide is excellent means, however, others hold opposite view. In my opinion, touring alone is the best way for two noticeable reasons.
The main reason is that individuals enjoy moments when they do not travel in a group led by a tour guide. tours have fixed plans, including limited number of locations, hotel, foods, cities or countries, and so on. Furthermore, in group, everybody has different personality and habitual, ones prefer spending their time in shopping while others select visiting monuments. Obviously, traveling in groups restrict individuals doing favorite entertainment, while touring alone will not have limitation. For example, when I was in high school, I went to Meshhad in group of students directed by tour guide. we settled in bad place, where was very small and mess. In addition, we suffered from tasteless food because tours did not care about their healthy passengers. Even all over at night, I could not sleep very well due to the fact students who playful character distrubed others who calm personality. if I had travel alone, I never would have suffered from groups. This experience taught me, touring alone is the best way for traveling.
Another reason is that traveling alone decrease expenses. if people travel alone, they themselves can determine where to go, or what stuff to buy, or what food eat. In other words, everyone has various choice how spend him money. For instance, when my friend finished exams in university, he traveled to Canada alone. At first, he decided to go to by tour including a lot of traveler. however, when he compared how much money pay for tour, he changed him planing and determined to journey alone. he could buy the cheapest plane tickets and also reserved excellent hotel at a minimum price. Therefore, he could cut off unnecessary expenses that must passengers pay to tours. As you can see, traveling alone is better than in groups.
In conclusion, traveling alone have special advantage that traveling in groups do no. Not only does enjoy your journeying, but also it reduces expenses significantly. passenger should travel alone to have good time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2008.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10941475827 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69131577427 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605597964377 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7325969967 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.2307692308 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1153846154 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.34615384615 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218190975303 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628578678422 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644842517776 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131455659635 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431368646927 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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