Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
As a favorite grandchild of my grandmother, there was one favor that I always used to ask from her, and that was the request to tell the stories about her time. Listening to her talk about the life she used to live with her large family back in a rural village, I used to reflect that with my own. Not only did I realize it was such a difficult life people lived during such times, but I also felt grateful for the life I had. In terms of health improvement, technological advancements and the better laws and regulations, our life is a lot more convenie than that of my grandparents, in every sense.
With health being the fundamental aspect of anyone's life, access to healthy food and the medicinal facilities are two crucial elements. People in earlier times, had lesser availability of nutritious food than what is accessible at the present. Due to good awareness practices about healthy food, proper market access to variety of products, people live less disease free life than the ones who had to suffer so many simple illness due to lack of vitamins found in food. Furthermore, access to health facilities was a very huge thing for people like my grandmother back when they were children. I remember an incident she told me about how she lost a toddler brother because of asthma. Since the doctors couldn't diagnose the disease until much later, so she lost a family member. But, today it is not just services that have developed, they have also become more accessible and available to common people therby making the life of the people more comfortable.
Now that we have a good health condition, the second best blessings our generation is entitlled to, is the advancement of technology. People used to live a much complicated life in early days because they lacked basic services. One particualr example would be the experience of my grandmother and her friends walking for 2 hours to reach to her school because they had no motorable roads. In contrast, I live in a time where my school bus drops me off at my doorstep. It is in this regard live a much easier life than my grandparents ever did.
Another very important aspect of a better life in today's world are the reforms in the legal issues. Back then, people had to suffer inequality in terms of caste, gender and ethnicity. But today the constitution has declared everyone equal and thus provided fair chance for all. For example: I can vote irrespective of me identifying as a girl, but my grandma never could. Even more, with the laws such as labor rights, today less people like industry workers, fall into opression than the ones in the early days.
So, gathering up all the bits and pieces from above expalnation, it is obvious to address that life in the present scenario is more easy going and comfortable for everyone than the time when my grandparents were children. A promise to good health, convenience drawn from technological advancements and the sound legal system, have made living this life a truly grateful experience. I wonder what life would be like for my grandchildren, now that I think my life is so better than my grandparents?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, so, then, thus, for example, i think, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2596.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 545.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76330275229 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70349647509 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506422018349 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 822.6 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4155558201 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.166666667 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7083333333 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201194305418 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593115009109 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056305018911 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120683183348 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401305558649 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.