Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
With a world consisting of approximately seven billion people, there is bound to be a diversity of opinions and views. People are consistently learning new things and perceiving new insights based on the variety of opinions portrayed to the public. The author suggests that those who share similar views enable each other to gain more knowledge revolving around the subject in question. I strongly disagree that there is more abundance of knowledge retrieved from similar views compared to that of opposing views for two reasons.
Learning is usually a concept of acquiring new information or expanding on what we already have pertained in our minds. If we already share a similar opinion with another person, chances are we probably not only have a tantamount knowledge of that specific topic, but the material is also very similar. For instance, let's take gun control laws as an example. This sensitive topic has a plethora of different views. Some of these views differ in how they see the weapon and some differ in how they see the person behind the weapon. If two individuals who oppose to the freedom to bear arms coalesce and share their views, it is less likely they will be sharing new information, but rather strenghtening their opinion on what they already perceive and exchanging information on what they already might know. Similarly, if we take two indivuals who support the right to bear arms and place them in the same room for discussion regarding this topic, they would emulate the opposing party tactics. However, if we take an individual from each party and let them discuss their views, it may lead to a heated debate, however, it would not be without new perception and new information. The pro-gun individual may provide an example of safety measures or atrocious cases revolving guns that the other might have ignored as they did not know much about that topic and similarly the one who is opposing might share his knowledge that the other participant individual failed to acknolwedge since he was biased. Thus, we learn more from those with opposing views than similar views.
Not only do same-perception socialization limit our knowledge and learning curve, it also puts a blind on our own discrepencies in our opinions. For example, many people want to abolish tax. However, that is the governments main revenue. It is one of the reasons why everyone gets to go to primary school for free unlike many other countries. Now, two individuals discussing this matter might merely strenghten their opinions talking to each other and perhaps gain more information such as which countries do or do not have high or low taxes, thus 'learning' more. However, if someone who opposes to tax abolition conversates with them, they would share the same information regarding revenue and schools as mentioned above and therefore the anti-tax party would be able to acknowledge the fallacies in their opinion.
Disagreements may cause stress and stress is a significant factor in the learning process, many times it is negative. However, stress is also a positive factor in the learning curve and disagreements provide with more stress but also more insights to the world. Those who share the same perceptions might be biased against opposing views, leading to them mentally shutting out the unknown information, and precluding themselves from obtaining new information. With differences of opinions, we also realize the fallacies in our perceptions. Thus, we learn more with opposing views compared to the knowledge we obtain with similar views.
- Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free. 83
- Some people believe that society should try to save every plant and animal species, despite the expense to humans in effort, time, and financial well-being. Others believe that society need not make extraordinary efforts, especially at a great cost in mon 66
- Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds. 58
- Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as 66
- All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 76, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to curve'
Suggestion: to curve
...zation limit our knowledge and learning curve, it also puts a blind on our own discre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, regarding, similarly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 33.0505617978 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3153.0 2235.4752809 141% => OK
No of words: 614.0 442.535393258 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13517915309 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.977853291 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72322687737 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459283387622 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 969.3 704.065955056 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7954880411 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.777777778 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7407407407 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92592592593 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0553459690988 0.243740707755 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0166105123524 0.0831039109588 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0194526752341 0.0758088955206 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0353879819344 0.150359130593 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122724068976 0.0667264976115 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 100.480337079 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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